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Someone's Always There by ~AirySoul:iconAirySoul:



So many thoughts
Swirling in your head,
Around and around,
Never getting anywhere.
Anxiety and fear build up
To drown you in despair.

Driving you insane,
With no end in sight.
Pace and go,
Up and down,
Never stopping,
Never halting.

The future, the past,
All start to blur
And contort
Into a shapeless blob.
Worries, problems,
And fear dominate
To create an inky darkness.

It builds and builds.
It taunts you with
unreachable solutions,
and chaos ensues.

Then it reaches its peak,
And your mind shatters.
You cry out in pain,
Fear and despair,
But there is no one
There to hear.

You recoil in your mind
From the outside world,
And slowly drown
In darkness.

As you lie there
And wait,
Your mind dead and gone,
Your spirit takes over.

Hope flourishes
As you recognize there is
Someone listening,
And caring.
God is holding you
While you cry.

And you give up,
And you let go.
Put all your thoughts
And problems
Into his hands,
Your hopes and dreams.

You are no longer
In charge
And you can relax,
At last.
God is older, wiser,
And perfect.
You know he’ll love you
Forever,
And he’ll do what he knows
Is best, for you.

You pick yourself off the floor,
Put your hand in his,
And, together,
Go forth into life
Once again.

To live, to love,
To forgive,
And to be truly
At peace.
©2006-2009 ~AirySoul
:iconairysoul:

Author's Comments

written august 26, 2006.

hey guys, long time no see or write. lol. how are y'all?

i've been careful about not alienating or offending ppl with my spiritual poetry, so i almost never post it.
but i went to a retreat, and was changed.
god healed so many wounds, finally made me whole.
made me a new woman.

take it as you wish, but this was an awesome experience for me, so i thought i would commemorate it with a poem.
i love god. and this is part of my story.

enjoy.

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:iconmundolibre:
wow, honestamente... el final no me convencio mucho pero el inicio a la mitad esta increbile!!
hey... I just wrote a poem, I have it in spanish and in english so... If you can check it please... I want to know your opinion
:iconkeldog1989:
wow. How ironic *looks at one of my latest poems* Anyway, I'm really glad you found something to help you though the hard times and to renue your spirit. That's amazing.

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:iconday-dreamer07:
rather dark for you....but I'm glad you know how important it is to have a message.:) I can't tell you how many poems I've read that end at the "my life sucks" part. nice job.:)

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:iconairysoul:
oh yeah. hmm. i will read. just might be a while. busy busy.

yo se, i am losing my touch. ahi voy. poco a poco.

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Poetry is my sanity.
My advice:
:D Be you, and don't let anyone tell you different. :D
:iconairysoul:
thank you.

--
Poetry is my sanity.
My advice:
:D Be you, and don't let anyone tell you different. :D
:iconairysoul:
yeah. i am no longer the same girl. lol. grown up a bit.
long time no see. how are u?

--
Poetry is my sanity.
My advice:
:D Be you, and don't let anyone tell you different. :D
:iconday-dreamer07:
well, my senior year is turning out to be the opposite of everyhitn I kind of thought I had a right to...but that's life, right?:)

I really miss you, :XD: :hug: drop me a line some time: aquarian_n_proud@yahoo.com.

--
Wordsmith, Retail Associate, Americorps Volunteer,
PFS tutor, and Prevention specialist
looking to use her creative writing degree...creatively. :)

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:iconairysoul:
i miss you too. but i am back a bit.

--
Poetry is my sanity.
My advice:
:D Be you, and don't let anyone tell you different. :D
:iconday-dreamer07:
:w00t:

yay!!

--
Wordsmith, Retail Associate, Americorps Volunteer,
PFS tutor, and Prevention specialist
looking to use her creative writing degree...creatively. :)

[link] ~ The Fresh Story
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