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Looking Up by ~AirySoul:iconAirySoul:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Nature > Open


Looking up,
See the blue
Turn to gray.
See the clouds gather
Into a broiling, churning
Mass of air.

Looking up,
Wind blasts through
Strands of auburn hair
To separate
And toss in the air.

Looking up,
Brown eyes
Open wide,
Filled with wonder
And awe.

Looking up,
Arms raised,
Palms up,
An offering to the
Thundering sky.

Looking up,
Mouth open,
Tongue out,
Hoping to catch
The first
Drop.
©2006-2009 ~AirySoul
:iconairysoul:

Author's Comments

written may 11, 2006.

this was an english assignment that i absolutely enjoyed. imagist poems and poets.
the concept is that the poet wanted to freeze something in time, in words. so an imagist poem is short, sweet, and like a snapshot of a scene. very descriptive, yet very few words used.

i like how mine came out. and now it is yours to read and enjoy.

so, enjoy!

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*Miss-Katalyst Jun 14, 2006, 4:24:59 PM
I hope you got 100 on that assignment, well ms. W liked you anyway
very clear images (duh thats what the assignment was) and the mood of it is nice
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~Mundolibre Jun 17, 2006, 6:48:31 AM
^o^ ta buen to bueno
se ven graciosos los poemas de estrofas cortas XD
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~AirySoul Jun 17, 2006, 5:11:29 PM
glad you liked.

--
Poetry is my sanity.
My advice:
:D Be you, and don't let anyone tell you different. :D
:iconairysoul:
~AirySoul Jun 17, 2006, 5:22:53 PM
:D son nada mas para que te rias. son para ti mundo. haha.

--
Poetry is my sanity.
My advice:
:D Be you, and don't let anyone tell you different. :D
:iconmundolibre:
~Mundolibre Jun 22, 2006, 11:28:35 AM
son para que me ria? XDDDD
por cierto, a ver cuando me haces un poema XDDDDDD
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