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His eyes.
They really are like no other.
One minute,
They are flat, cold steel.
But then he looks at me
And they become
Shimmering pools
Of liquid mercury.
He needs me,
I can see it in those eyes.
He is afraid I will leave him,
Like all the others.
He can’t comprehend yet
That someone may actually love him,
That someone genuinely cares.
He’s been through so much,
So alone and isolated.
He will never admit he needs me,
But I don’t need a confession,
I know he does.
It is there in his eyes
When he looks at me,
When the flatness and cold
Disappear,
And I am left
With shimmering pools
Of silver.

And, who knows?
Maybe he can heal me, too.
©2006-2009 ~AirySoul
:iconairysoul:

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written april 25, 2006.
i like it.
short and nice.

enjoy!

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:iconthelovelynightsky:
beautiful
i really felt the emotion in this :]

love the lines 'he cant comprehend yet,/ That someone may actually love him,/That someone genuinely cares.
reminds me of my ex-bf lol

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"Technically I can never sleep with you, Bella." -Edward Cullen
"Very Mature Edward." - Bella Swan

<3
:iconreoku:
wow, i really like this... its great. I'm especially fond of things about love, and how eyes tell emotion. just addictions of mine. The story it tells... is great to. Especially the reference of steel and mercury. I can see it. I'll be watching you ^^
:iconairysoul:
thank you. i'm glads you liked it.

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Poetry is my sanity.
My advice:
:D Be you, and don't let anyone tell you different. :D
:iconairysoul:
yay! i'll be watching oyu too. i'm glad the imagery is understandable. cool. thanks.

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Poetry is my sanity.
My advice:
:D Be you, and don't let anyone tell you different. :D
:iconmiss-katalyst:
aww how pretty, style is growing or evovling any its a very nice poem kudos and granola
:iconmundolibre:
sip, los ojos son una gran fuente de expresion
:iconairysoul:
thanks. couldn't find anywhere any fishnet jackets. need to go to walmart. damn.

--
Poetry is my sanity.
My advice:
:D Be you, and don't let anyone tell you different. :D
:iconairysoul:
que bueno que lo entiendes.

--
Poetry is my sanity.
My advice:
:D Be you, and don't let anyone tell you different. :D
:iconmiss-katalyst:
they proly don't have them any more

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